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Hand element: Fireball by tvlookplay Hand element: Fireball by tvlookplay
hmm might make another one without a fireball :P


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The Good.

From what I've read of the comments, they say you got the fire down and I must agree with them that the fire is very well done. It stands out against the black background, which only serves to help boost up the brightness of the fire.
I also like how the 'ball' appears to have something inside of it, as I can swear that I see wings in the middle of it.

The Bad. I do know that you have a specific color pallet that you were wanting to stick to, but I would have wanted to see some deeper colors in there, such as red's and blue's, which could have helped boost it up some more.

The summary.
A very good piece with very little, if that, that might be improved upon.
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6 out of 6 deviants thought this was fair.

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Overall it seems nice.
The tones and colors are used well but I barely noticed the hand underneath without zooming in. It's a bit too dark for having, y'know, fire right there. Also, if it is a flaming ball I would assume their would be large licks of flames going up rather than small wispy flames. Other than that, the other guy took the words out of my mouth. A few more colors would be nice such as reds/blues, maybe depending on how hot you want it to come off as, some whites. The balance of the colors seems to lead more towards too much orange. Fire has mostly orange hues, which I can assume is why you had mostly orange in this, but also has other colors where the fire originates. White=hottest (hence stars) blue= 2nd hottest, and then all the other colors you can see in almost any regular fire like a lighter/candle/fireplace. What I can suggest? Stare at a fireplace/bonfire and just watch how the flames act at different colors/heat/places to make a more realistic feel. I myself enjoy bonfires and watching the flames which is probably why I picked up on that. ^^ But I still love the way you pull these off and think you should try and get these out there for a career. You pay more attention to small detail than most paid photo shoppers.
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CutInSaber Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2016
Great work man!

Would it be possible for me to use the image in my channel art?
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:iconneverdying:
neverdying Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Hey dude your work is featured here: [link] :)
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:icontvlookplay:
tvlookplay Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks man i appreciated :D
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theheek Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
great fireball
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:icontvlookplay:
tvlookplay Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you ;)
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:icontheheek:
theheek Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
u are welcome
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san85 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
looks cool
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tvlookplay Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you ;)
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san85 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
yw
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il-neige Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
amazing! love the lighting
keep up the good work
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tvlookplay Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you much appreciated :D
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Amy-Sun Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
awesome! :heart:
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tvlookplay Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you much appreciated :D
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:iconamy-sun:
Amy-Sun Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
you are very welcome! :aww:
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aradia1015 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Professional General Artist
Awesome
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tvlookplay Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you much appreciated :D
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:iconsnusy:
Snusy Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student General Artist
wooooooooooooow, this work is so cool.. the effect of the flames is magnificent!!! awesome job !!
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:icontvlookplay:
tvlookplay Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you much appreciated :D
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BigA-nt Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nicely done - great use of the flames. Looks great. Well done. :D
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:icontvlookplay:
tvlookplay Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you much appreciated :D
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MewMewMizuno Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This looks very impressive! Maybe you could've defined the hand a bit more (if that's the right word ^^'), but the ball itself is very well done. Keep up the good work and have a nice day :)
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tvlookplay Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you much appreciated. I want the hand to look that way but thank you for the suggestion :D
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DragonflyLite Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm, it almost looks like water in texture. Neat-o.
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tvlookplay Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you much appreciated :D
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roamingtigress Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Great work; I love how the fire contrasts against the black background. Very eye catching :)
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:icontvlookplay:
tvlookplay Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you much appreciated :D
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roamingtigress Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
You are very welcome!
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blazi76 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
... it's not easy to play with fire

... and you did great :)
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:icontvlookplay:
tvlookplay Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you much appreciated :D
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CentralCityTower Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Katon: Rasengan
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tvlookplay Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you much appreciated :D
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L-Y-N-S Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Professional Filmographer
This is very nice. I would recommend a layer with some added light since it is a fireball, but otherwise good
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tvlookplay Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you much appreciated, and yeah i thought of that :D
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Frank-Beer Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013   Photographer
Nice and pretty piece of work. :clap:
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tvlookplay Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you much appreciated :D
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tvlookplay Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i was experimenting.

feel free to decline or delete :)
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ksavvyx3 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing job, I do love fire. :D
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tvlookplay Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :D
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peccatori Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Simply Amazing! <3
:santa:Merry Christmas!:heart:
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tvlookplay Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you polish :D
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Lhianne Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
wonderful work :heart:
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:icontvlookplay:
tvlookplay Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you say this knowing your work is better then mine, right! :D


sometimes i cant take a compliment >.>
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Lhianne Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
Hehe, seems you can't take a compliment but I really like this work. Working with fire is really hard and in this work very fits together. So, no, no, no, my work isn't better, you did a really good job on this :clap:
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MandieEllie Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is really beautiful~! Fire tends to be hard to create but you did a fantastic job at it!

The only thing is, I cannot tell where the fireball begins and the hand ends.
They seem to blend in together. Maybe try to make the hand more noticeable to help differentiate between the two.
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tvlookplay Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i will take your suggestion into consideration :)

thank you very much :3
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SenZzo-art Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very good, only one little thing: the lighter lines around the fingers don't belong imho. Maybe try another type of blending?
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tvlookplay Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you for the suggestion i will take it into consideration :)
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iKestrel Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist
Oooh... You should try doing "the four elements" =P Fire, Ice, Wind and Plants (Earth is a liiiiiittle too much like fire if you draw it dontcha think?).

...

Anyways, Im spewing nonsense here, You're awesome.
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