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December 19, 2012
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Canon
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Canon EOS 5D
Shutter Speed
1/125 second
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F/16.0
Focal Length
67 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Feb 8, 2009, 2:34:56 AM
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Microsoft Windows Photo Viewer 6.1.7600.16385
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Hand element: Fireball by tvlookplay Hand element: Fireball by tvlookplay
hmm might make another one without a fireball :P


stock :iconstock7000: :iconrhyme2k:
Fire :iconxresch:









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The Good.

From what I've read of the comments, they say you got the fire down and I must agree with them that the fire is very well done. It stands out against the black background, which only serves to help boost up the brightness of the fire.
I also like how the 'ball' appears to have something inside of it, as I can swear that I see wings in the middle of it.

The Bad. I do know that you have a specific color pallet that you were wanting to stick to, but I would have wanted to see some deeper colors in there, such as red's and blue's, which could have helped boost it up some more.

The summary.
A very good piece with very little, if that, that might be improved upon.
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Overall it seems nice.
The tones and colors are used well but I barely noticed the hand underneath without zooming in. It's a bit too dark for having, y'know, fire right there. Also, if it is a flaming ball I would assume their would be large licks of flames going up rather than small wispy flames. Other than that, the other guy took the words out of my mouth. A few more colors would be nice such as reds/blues, maybe depending on how hot you want it to come off as, some whites. The balance of the colors seems to lead more towards too much orange. Fire has mostly orange hues, which I can assume is why you had mostly orange in this, but also has other colors where the fire originates. White=hottest (hence stars) blue= 2nd hottest, and then all the other colors you can see in almost any regular fire like a lighter/candle/fireplace. What I can suggest? Stare at a fireplace/bonfire and just watch how the flames act at different colors/heat/places to make a more realistic feel. I myself enjoy bonfires and watching the flames which is probably why I picked up on that. ^^ But I still love the way you pull these off and think you should try and get these out there for a career. You pay more attention to small detail than most paid photo shoppers.
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neverdying Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Hey dude your work is featured here: [link] :)
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tvlookplay Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks man i appreciated :D
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theheek Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
great fireball
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tvlookplay Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you ;)
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theheek Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
u are welcome
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san85 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
looks cool
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tvlookplay Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you ;)
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san85 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
yw
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il-neige Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
amazing! love the lighting
keep up the good work
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tvlookplay Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you much appreciated :D
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